TotallyOz Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 We are getting ready to put our ad in HX magazine for a long term contract. Here is the ad. What do you think? Quote
Guest TNTTed Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 Very good looking model. Who's your primary audience, client or escort? Quote
Members nytb Posted February 5, 2009 Members Posted February 5, 2009 Please consider changing the background color. There's already too many continuing full and half page ads in the back of HX using black as their background including that of Rentboy. Otherwise YUM! Quote
Guest FourAces Posted February 6, 2009 Posted February 6, 2009 its ok i think it can look better. i like much of it except the free listings free photos and free forums part "free" is kind of overused. plus the layout of those 3 free services is kind of odd, doesn't really attract my attention. good luck with it though. Quote
Guest zachary Posted February 6, 2009 Posted February 6, 2009 its ok i think it can look better. i like much of it except the free listings free photos and free forums part "free" is kind of overused. plus the layout of those 3 free services is kind of odd, doesn't really attract my attention. good luck with it though. black means high class, except in the chewing gum that bombed in the 90s white and red mean comedies re the posters green, minty, germ free, mouthwash, comet white, clean yellow, lemon fresh, foot powder, brown? not even garbage bags anymore i like the ad, but does it stand out, i don't know... now i can imagine the commerical, tired of hiring people whose pic is this, and when they show up, they look like this? u can show it from both sides of the coin. btw, the network doing the super bowl would not run the ad for the dating site for married people wanting an affair, the commerical was pretty funny, husband putting his hand on his wife's lips while he talks on the phone, looks at his teeth in the knife's reflection, generally a slob, and then the wife smiles at a man at the next table. pretty clever. Quote
Guest mineallmine Posted February 6, 2009 Posted February 6, 2009 I think the model is superb two thumbs up! I am in agreement maybe some break up in the background might add interest. Or maybe some highlighting and shadowing to give some depth. Otherwise I think its pretty good. I do like that you put that the reviews are actually looked over and careful consideration is put into them. That is something very unique to MER. Quote
TotallyOz Posted February 8, 2009 Author Posted February 8, 2009 Very good looking model. Who's your primary audience, client or escort? The primary market is for clients. We want to get them on the site to hire the guys here. its ok i think it can look better. i like much of it except the free listings free photos and free forums part "free" is kind of overused. plus the layout of those 3 free services is kind of odd, doesn't really attract my attention. good luck with it though. What would attract your attention? This is just the one for a few weeks, we can change it whenever we want but need to find a designer to do it for us. That is always hard as I do not have good tastes when it comes to colors and stuff. Nasty thoughts are my forte. Please consider changing the background color. There's already too many continuing full and half page ads in the back of HX using black as their background including that of Rentboy. Otherwise YUM! I tend to agree on the background color and will try to splash it up a bit for the next version. Quote
Guest FourAces Posted February 8, 2009 Posted February 8, 2009 since u asked i would drop the free listings, free forums, free photos in favor of a block quote such as: Interact with both clients and escorts in our informative 24/7 message center. i wouldn't be too concern about escort listings in this ad as the ad itself is sure to attract escorts to the site. i believe its more important to stay focused on one message ... in this case clients. also one thing i have learned about print ads is they need a boarder ... a tasteful very thin pin stripe boarder would be perfect for helping the ad stand out. again good luck with the campaign. as the more people discover the site it will only make it stronger. then i can start a few forum wars to scare them off Quote
